Monday, November 21, 2005

Reader haiku



quiet empty space
you must have abandoned us
winter - no comment

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15 Comments:

Blogger b1-66er said...

the deepest of chills
are in the darkest winters
with no wind blowing

8:12 am  
Blogger ddd;a;al said...

haikus make me sick
but i just want to fit in
and be accepted

9:55 am  
Blogger haiku cafe said...

http://www.lyricz.net/T/The+Beatles/113149/

beyond campfires rim
(ghosts javelin sorcery)
map blizzards o' light

http://forums.nytimes.com/top/opinion/readersopinions/forums/newyorkregion/urbanhaiku/index.html?page=recent

11:40 am  
Blogger Sara said...

Thanks b1 and Sauce pot, I really felt the love there.

1:15 pm  
Blogger haiku cafe said...

oops.. after THE autopsy

2:10 pm  
Blogger Sara said...

Not sure I understand....

3:12 pm  
Blogger haiku cafe said...

one of the attributes attributed (browse photos on web?) of alien visitors (ahem) are that they use abvanced surgical techniques to cut portions out of cows in america.

my bad html (to link pic) required a sort of surgery of my blot.

it sort of weaves together (on the spur of the moment)?

in a nutshell: hi y'all! :)

ps: as creatives do you (and your partner) not find that whatever transpires is freighted with meaning that unfolds in the silence between any query and its child?

i do.

4:27 pm  
Blogger Alistair Spalding said...

It's not Haiku but . . .

Shuffling, straggly, long haired shouting man.
Shout shout shout.
Response in the distance.
Your ears prick up.
You are like a bird
Or a body snatcher.

9:09 pm  
Blogger haiku cafe said...

or a bouncy castle?

oooO
.( . )
. \ ( Oooo
. (_) ( . )
. . . . ) /
. . . (_/

9:29 pm  
Blogger Sara said...

MIKKEEEEEL!! come home now. we have a situation.

10:01 pm  
Blogger haiku cafe said...

You're sweet.

10:46 pm  
Anonymous the eye said...

... everything under control here? Or do you need reinforcement?

10:58 pm  
Blogger Mikkel said...

OK - Slow down.

First of all:
Hello, Alistair! It's been a while. Good of you to drop by.

Secondly:
Haiku café - May I call you John? Let me be blunt: You are insane.

Please don't feel hurt that I said that. And don't misunderstand; you see, that's completely OK by me. I commented on your blog, so you can comment on mine.

However, until I'm sure of the exact substance and extent of your insanity I must insist that you adhere strictly to the following rules:

1) You are allowed to make a maximum of 1 (one) comment a day on this blog.

2) The comment MUST be in the form of a haiku.

3) If I don't like your comment I will simply delete it.

Just nod if you agree.

If you disagree with my diagnosis, or have questions about the rules, or have any additional comments to make, please feel free to contact me by e-mail.

Thirdly:
This goes for everyone - AND I'M SERIOUS: No more comments on this post.

11:44 pm  
Blogger Mikkel said...

OK everyone, now you can comment on this post again.

2:59 am  
Blogger Mikkel said...

....Aaaaaaaand, NOW you can't.

2:24 am  

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